mollybubbz (mollybubbz) wrote in beetlejuicefans,

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Ohai, I'm pretty new to Livejournal. And when I say new, I mean I've only just joined it. ^.^

ANYWAY, I like fell in love, and I mean *love* with Beetle Juice the other day and I decided to write a short little fanfiction for it - fanfiction is, unfortunately, my life at the moment.

Anyway, the Beetle Juice fanfiction bit is completely dead and I just wondered if you guys could check it out and give me your thoughts on it.

I'd much appreciate it.
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well its not that bad. a few things like the short killing or so of her brother buuut the character of betelgeuse is quite okay...especially for you being new at this fandom XD enjoyed reading. maybe you want to write more?
Thanks for looking it over. I was worried no one would read it.

I must admit, the length did bug me a bit too; I'm not the best at writing a lot although I am trying to make my fanfictions longer these days.

And, the death of her brother being so ... shortish and sudden ties back with my shortness. That, and I couldn't think of anything else to do.
Thanks again for looking it over.